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Jinx Attempt 2 by V2AUZoltanKhan Jinx Attempt 2 by V2AUZoltanKhan
Just a dumb doodle with little effort. Trying to find a style of coloring as well as getting back at drawing. I was not happy with my last Jinx drawing (coloring was great, though).

FYI, used THIS as a reference: vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/t…
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:iconsterreko:
Sterreko Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2016
Interesting choice of coloring, haven't seen it before. It looks good ;)
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V2AUZoltanKhan Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2017  Professional General Artist
Thanks. Is there anything you can critique on? Anything you think I could add, remove or change altogether?
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:iconsterreko:
Sterreko Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2017
I feel that I'm way too inexperienced to give you a critique...
But if I'd drawn it myself, I probably would've done something with her body. Maybe you should've given her clothes?
It doesn't bother me that much, but that's what I would've done :)
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V2AUZoltanKhan Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2017  Professional General Artist
Ok then. Thanks :)
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:iconhaana-suno:
Haana-Suno Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love how you didn't alter the character you were able to draw her in your own style, but still keeping her the same, as well as capture her character, (who she is), in the drawing 😊
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V2AUZoltanKhan Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2016  Professional General Artist
Thanks a million :D What do you think I could improve on in your opinion? As a more professional artist, I want to hear your opinion so that I the aspiring artist can improve! :)
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Haana-Suno Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's not a problem at all! (Sorry for the late reply ^^;)
Trust me, I'm nowhere near professional! I would suggest for you to look up different art tutorials and gather bits and pieces from them. get into the habit of drawing different poses, facial expressions, experimenting with different art styles, as well as colors. When you draw and if you want to be serious at it, you want to expand your horizon. Don't worry too much if it seems that you're "not getting it right", or that you think your "art skills aren't where you want them to be", because it's gonna take time. And most importantly draw for yourself and have fun. When you draw, be loose and don't stress. Whatever emotions you have while drawing, it'll show in your art. And PRACTICE, PRACTICE, PRACTICE! If you have any other questions, about drawing, please feel more than free to drop me a message! I hope this helps! 
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PyrePyro98 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2016
I really like the highlights on her and the black comic book style shading is an extra nice touch to the piece. ;)
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V2AUZoltanKhan Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2016  Professional General Artist
Thanks a million. Comic book style is EXACTLY what I was going for! :D I'm glad I achieved that.

That being the case, is there anything you think I could improve on? It would certainly help me if you could give me your two cents :)

Also, is that the Butt Witch from Twelve Forever? :D
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PyrePyro98 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2016
My only thoughts of improvement on this would be making the line art more smooth. Other than that, the piece is very well done and it is a nice interpretation on comic styles. It was really well planned out with the background colouring and highlighted areas.
(And yes, that's the Butt Witch from Twelve Forever) :)
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V2AUZoltanKhan Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2016  Professional General Artist
Thanks a bunch for the critique, I will definitely keep it in mind. :D

Also, do you hope to God Twelve Forever becomes a series? :)
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PyrePyro98 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2016
Yes! It should be a series! It needs more than a pilot!! :D
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V2AUZoltanKhan Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2016  Professional General Artist
Well, here's hoping it doesn't become yet another Adventure Time clone like Steven Universe or Gravity Falls :P More like CN's version of Star Vs. The Forces of Evil (aka an Americanized version of the Magical Genre, much like Avatar was an Americanized version of Chinese folklore) :P
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PyrePyro98 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2016
I imagine it would be similar to Star Vs. The Forces of Evil. :)
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:iconv2auzoltankhan:
V2AUZoltanKhan Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016  Professional General Artist
Who's your favorite character though? Mine is Reggie and Shane (yeah, not much characters to go with but it IS just the first episode ^^;)
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k-Liight Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
cute! love the coloring ^^
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V2AUZoltanKhan Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2016  Professional General Artist
Really? 'Cuz I didn't put TOO much effort into it ^^;
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k-Liight Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
well hey, it still looks cool XD
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:iconv2auzoltankhan:
V2AUZoltanKhan Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2016  Professional General Artist
I know, I'm just stating the obvious ^^;

So, what do you think of it?
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:iconk-liight:
k-Liight Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
XD

I really like it, it's kinda psychedelic, but now like cutesy happy psychedelic, but kind of an edgy, metallic psychedelic? I'm not sure how else to explain it, but it's a really cool effect I've never seen before ^^
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V2AUZoltanKhan Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2016  Professional General Artist
I get the gist of it :P

With that said, is there anything you think I could improve on? Anything I need to add, remove or change altogether? It would certainly help me a lot with improving my art in the future :)
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k-Liight Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
:P

I think the only thing I would change is to put the left side of her hair a little loser to her head, and maybe bring it up a little too, to match the perspective :)
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V2AUZoltanKhan Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2016  Professional General Artist
Thanks a bunch. I will definitely keep that in mind :nod:
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MagicHeartACH Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Looks pretty good :D
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:iconv2auzoltankhan:
V2AUZoltanKhan Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2016  Professional General Artist
Thanks. Is there anything you think I could add, change or remove altogether? Anything I could improve on? It would certainly help me a lot! :)
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MagicHeartACH Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well how about doing a full Jinx attempt 3?
The best advice that I can give you is to draw her until you gotta just how you want it because practice is the very best way of improvement hope that it helps...
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V2AUZoltanKhan Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2016  Professional General Artist
It does a ton! :D

Thanks a million. I will definitely use this critique in the future, it's the reason I asked in the first place :hug:
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:iconpenguin04:
penguin04 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Cool
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:iconv2auzoltankhan:
V2AUZoltanKhan Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2016  Professional General Artist
You really think so? :)
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:iconpenguin04:
penguin04 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Yes
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:iconv2auzoltankhan:
V2AUZoltanKhan Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2016  Professional General Artist
Is there anything you would critique about it? Anything at all? It would certainly help me improve my art :)
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penguin04 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Maybe you could add cloths or actually draw her body at the chest. It looked weird having just skin bring there. Or take that part out entirely. Other than that, it looks cool
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V2AUZoltanKhan Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2016  Professional General Artist
Well it was just a doodle ^^; but yeah, I definitely will in the future ;)
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penguin04 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Ok :)
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